हर शाम छत पर
जब अश्कों की आँच में
टूटे ख़्वाबों को
जलाती है वो
तो धधकने लगती है
ख्वाहिशों की लौ!
सिहरती हवाओं का इक हुजूम
उड़ा ले जाता है संग
चंद अंगारों को
और फेंक देता है
किसी आसमां के सीने पर!
बच्चे खुश होते हैं
उन 'तारों' को देखकर
मुसाफिरों को मंजिल मिल जाती है
स्याह 'रात' जगमगा उठती है
और लोग
उन दम तोड़ते सुलगते अरमानों से भी
उन दम तोड़ते सुलगते अरमानों से भी
मन्नते मांग लेते हैं !
किसी को किसी के अंधियारों से
क्या फर्क पड़ता है ..............!!
~Saumya
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Hi Saumya,
ReplyDelete...... wonderful Nice, interesting post.
सभी ही अच्छे शब्दों का चयन
ReplyDeleteऔर
अपनी सवेदनाओ को अच्छी अभिव्यक्ति दी है आपने.
तुम्हारी कल्पना शीलता बहुत अच्छी लगी....
सिहरती हवाओं का इक हुजूम
ReplyDeleteउड़ा ले जाता है
चंद अंगारों को
और फेंक देता है
किसी आसमां के सीने पर!
बहुत खूब ....सुन्दर पंक्तियाँ ....पढ़ कर बस आह ही निकली
वाह क्या लिखा है यार...बेहतरीन...
ReplyDeleteमेरे ब्लॉग में इस बार..
:) wow! as usual.. nice
ReplyDeletewow awesome. ashko ka milaan kahan ja karaya...soch bhi nahi pahuchti vaha.
ReplyDeletebahut acchha likhti ho tum.
और ये लगा फिर से सिक्सेर ...
ReplyDeleteजैसे कोई बल्लेवाज लगातार सिक्सेस लगा रहा हो.....
इसी तरह तुम भी एक के बाद एक बेहतरीन कविताएँ लिख रही हो.
हैं न ?
bahut achha likha hai, but wt happened? kya dukhi ho? bada sad-sad likh diya..........
ReplyDeleteअरे वा ! कविता ! मतलब हमारी बिरादरी में एक और बढा ।
ReplyDeletekisi ko kisi ke andhiyare se kya fark padta hai!!!
ReplyDeleteawe-fuckin-some!!! straight to my status message!
you're something!
awesome! Among your very best... hats off to you.
ReplyDeleteकिसी को किसी के अंधियारों से
ReplyDeleteक्या फर्क पड़ता है ..............!!
bahut hee khobsurat rachana ...dil ko chhootee hui panktiya...badhai..swagat ke sath..vijayanama.blogspot.com
I don't know why your poems touch my heart so much, always. Loved reading this.
ReplyDeleteतुम अपनी उम्र से बेहतर कविता कह लेती हो....जानता हूँ, लेखन उम्र से बंधा नहीं होता
ReplyDeleteअंतिम की पंक्तियाँ बहुत सुंदर हैं !!
ReplyDeletebehad behad behad sundar yaar ..thak se lagi sach me :)
ReplyDeletebahaot badhiya........congrats!u have mastered the art of poetry! :)
ReplyDeleteOMG!
ReplyDeletethat was so sad
how do u do that-just awe ur readers
love ur writings..
hEYY,DEAREst Soumya di,you're jsut outstanding,fantabulous!!I luv every writing of urz :>:>Stay blessed n keep writing ...sadiyoon mein koi Saumya janm leti hai yeh dil sey nikla vakaya hai!!much love n regards
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ReplyDelete@tulika:hey girl..it's good to see you here....and thanks a zillion for your words....love and smiles :)
ReplyDeleteWaah... Maza aa gaya yaar. I just want to say one thing, THANK YOU.
ReplyDeleteLuv ya too mah superfav n supergenius writer:>:>I know u r going to create a history!!!youe words are just wow,outta this world!!Kitna bhi keh lo,kitni bhi tareef kar lo kaam hii hai!!!
ReplyDeleteAAPke liye kuch lines maine likhe:
Har ek baat ko kitne achey sey keh jaati ho
Pyaar aur dosti ka rang bikhrati ho
Tum toh maa saraswati ko sabse jyada bhati ho
Itna pyaara likhti ho ki sabke dil ko choo jaati ho.
Stay Blessed di..luv ya n ur most-most welcum n I shud say thanks ifinite tyms for ur gr8 works!!pata chalta hai ki aap dil ki bahut hii achi ho":>:>mwahh
@Ambuj:thank you :)
ReplyDelete@Tulika: I'll remember this for the lifetime ......that's so sweet of you....a zillion thanks to you dear....very few people have written for me in return....I'm short of words....thank you for making me feel good ....love you too :)
ReplyDeleteone word...beautiful!!
ReplyDelete@Avinash ji: thank you!!
ReplyDeleteIt's beautiful dear. Pity I hadn't come by earlier. I need a mirror too dear. Help me please
ReplyDeletehttp://hear-it-out-for-me.blogspot.com/2010/11/victory.html
It was very emotional reading but loved it.. How are you doing dear?
ReplyDeleteLove
Sabi Sunshine
behad achchi lagi.
ReplyDelete@Rashmi: thank you so much!!
ReplyDelete@Sabi: thanks ya...I'm fine :)
ReplyDelete@Mridula ji: thank you ma'am!!
ReplyDeletebahut hi khoobsurat!!
ReplyDeleteI don't find many hindi blogs, written so amazingly..
I love your template . It is simple, beautiful and adorable...
Would love to read more of you :)
I do write some hindi poems , hope you like them
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Blog:GvSparx
@GvSparx:thank you for your visit here....I'm glad you liked it!!
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