'दिल' और 'दिमाग' में उलझनें बढ़ गयीं थीं,
साँसों की डोर में भी गिरहें पड़ गयीं थीं
आज बैठकर सुलझाया है सब कुछ
ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें रास आने लगी है!
माथे पर कुछ सिलवटें बेहद फिजूल थीं,
पलकों की छाँव में सिर्फ यादों की धूल थी
आज बैठकर मिटाया है सब कुछ
ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें लुभाने लगी है!
हाथ की लकीरों पर वक़्त की खरोंचे थीं,
लबों पर मुसकुराहट भी ज़ख्म सरीखी थीं
आज 'उम्मीद' का मरहम लगाया है सब पर
ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें अपनाने लगी है!ऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें रास आने लगी है!
~Saumya
गिरहें=knot,खरोंचे=scratches
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hmmmm.........saumya is kavita ko padhkar jindgi hamen bhi raas aane lagi hai.....aur bhaane lagi hai...theek tumhaari kavitaa kee tarah.....
ReplyDelete"आज उम्मीद का मरहम लगाया है सब पर
ReplyDeleteऐ ज़िन्दगी तू हमें अपनाने लगी है!"
ji bahut badhiya manobhaav....
ek saarthak soch ko darshaati rachna!
kunwar ji,
bahut bahut pyaari rachna ..sab kuch haar kar bhi jaise kuch jeet k sukoon me likhi hai ..bahut badhiya ..yahi jindgi hai :)
ReplyDeletethank you so much everyone!...God bless!..:)
ReplyDeleteहिम्मत ना हारने वाली सोच.. दरअसल जिंदगी में उतार चढ़ाव तो आते ही है.. पर उन सबसे उबरकर जो फिर से जिंदगी जी ले.. वही इंसान है..
ReplyDeleteबहुत अच्छे से प्रस्तुत की है ये भावनाए..
I'm happy for you that everything is o.k. in your life as I get the sense from your this nice poem. These lines might not belong to your life , in that case Sorry for taking things otherwise. Actully, Somya ji It happens with almost everyone and it feels great when things become normal again. I wish you all the best. Waiting for your next one. I'm in the habit of reading something new all the time. The new look of your blog is very appealing/attractive.
ReplyDeleteअति सुन्दर ।
ReplyDeletesuraj ki kiranein aaj subah is dhara par...
ReplyDeletejindagi ki nayi ashayein le kar aayi hai..
saumya teri ye panktiyan padh kar..
jindagi bhi muskurane lagi hai...
a nice poen again ...
keep it up saumya..
Devesh....
A picture with oozing enthusiasm, the sun shining bright on the new template and a poem full of 'life' aptly suited to the ambience.. lovely. Touchwood :)
ReplyDeleteI do this rarely.
ReplyDelete"Awwww"
I mean it.
All smiles.
kyun main zindagi ki baat manta raha aur kyun zindagi mujhe kabhi samajh na saki
ReplyDelete@kush ji,arunesh ji...thank you so much for liking the poem...
ReplyDelete@virendra singh ji....I'm in best of spirits....this poem is just showing my positive outlook of life...thank you for reading...and your best wishes....God Bless!
@devesh: thanks a lot for your encouraging words!
ReplyDelete@divesh:you nicely co-related everything...:)..and thanks a tonne for that 'Touchwood' :)
@mangoman: smiles back to you ..:)...thanks!
@rajat:zindagi nahi samajhti...hamein hi samajhna hota hai...:)
बहुत ही सुंदर .... एक एक पंक्तियों ने मन को छू लिया ...
ReplyDeleteहमेशा की तरह ये पोस्ट भी बेह्तरीन है
ReplyDeleteकुछ लाइने दिल के बडे करीब से गुज़र गई....
Nice poems saumya!! I'm not well versed in Hindi, but managed to understand it after several attempts.
ReplyDelete:)
thank you both!
ReplyDeletehmmm...quite liked the positive feel...
ReplyDeleten the line "ae zindagi tu hume raas aane lagi hai..".
@maverick: thanks!
ReplyDeleteso true..
ReplyDeletewenever my frnd was in trouble or sad he used to say this
'life is beautiful'
and it truely is :)
p.s wat is sreekhay
exceptional...
ReplyDelete@committed to life: yeah,life is beautiful :)
ReplyDelete'sareekhay' means 'resemblence of'
@sajal : thanks!
sakaratmak ravaiya liye bahut sunder kavita....
ReplyDeletethanks!
ReplyDeleteHello Saumya,
ReplyDeleteVery good imaginative words and wonderful expression. I liked your preception and the way you projected it in such beautiful words...
Regards...
thank you so much Dimps ....stay happy..:)
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