February 28, 2012

My sorrows are all mine alone...

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You share your happinesses with me,
I'll augment it manifold
You reel off your pain
I'll try to lessen the cold.

I'll also share my joys with you
If you do not at all mind,
but my sorrows are all mine alone
'un-said' and perhaps 'un-confined' !

22 comments:

  1. DiveshSeptember 22, 2010

    Unfair!

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  2. Beyond Few WordsSeptember 23, 2010

    is that the only condition?

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  3. SaumyaSeptember 23, 2010

    @Divesh: why??

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  4. SaumyaSeptember 23, 2010

    @Rajat:condition??...couldn't get you!!!

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  5. DiveshSeptember 23, 2010

    You cannot expect someone to "reel off their pain" if you keep your sorrows to yourself.

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  6. SaumyaSeptember 23, 2010

    @Divesh: what if I never let them know that I'm sad...and they can never make out that I'm in pain!!!

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  7. DiveshSeptember 23, 2010

    not humanly possible.. they who care will know.

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  8. विरेन्द्र सिंह चौहानSeptember 23, 2010

    I have to think many times before write anything on "MY LITTLE WORLD". Many times your post demands a lot of thinking from my side.

    Now this time I'd like to say that everything depends on person to person. This is my opinion.
    I may be wrong.

    Well ..Congrats on your nice work(This post).

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  9. Blasphemous AestheteSeptember 23, 2010

    Divesh said it,
    Unfair.

    this is not love, neither it is companionship. But isn't it what we all do? keep the pain hidden, share all the joys and expect our beloved to share their pains with us. Unfair, but still.

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  10. Arvind MohanSeptember 24, 2010

    hey
    its should be like this
    u must also be honest to share

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  11. megharanaSeptember 24, 2010

    i would say its completely justified to keep ur pains your own.....isn't it? only joys should be shared no pains........

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  12. SaumyaSeptember 25, 2010

    @Divesh:yeah...but not everyone cares,no?....anyways..I do this(i.e hide my pain)....so I have to disagree you!

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  13. SaumyaSeptember 25, 2010

    @Blasphemous Aesthete :first thing is that the 'you' above can be anyone -friends,relatives etc etc...and second thing is that I don't expect 'you' to reel off his/her pain...but if he/she does...I'll definitely try to console!

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  14. SaumyaSeptember 25, 2010

    @Virendra ji: yeah...it's my own way...thank you for the read!

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  15. Shekhar SumanSeptember 25, 2010

    ya sometimes itz difficult to decide whether we should share our pain with somebody or not....
    and itz also difficult to choose that somebody.....
    but as divesh said they will know who really care 4 you..
    nice poem..keep writing..
    मेरे ब्लॉग पर इस बार धर्मवीर भारती की एक रचना...
    जरूर आएँ.....

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  16. MaverickSeptember 25, 2010

    fair enough! i agree...the pain is not required to b shared .y? d very simple idea is: this is my pain..n i CAN deal wid it! i dont need a helping hand!
    loved the poetry for the sheer idea of self- belief n independence! good work!

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  17. monaliSeptember 28, 2010

    Its better to hide your pain...no one wants to b surrounded by sad faces... very beautiful poem...

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  18. psinghSeptember 30, 2010

    very nice..........
    thanks

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  19. Beyond Few WordsOctober 04, 2010

    condition: but my sorrows are all mine alone
    'un-said' and perhaps 'un-confined'.. why don't we share our sorrows and joys as well

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  20. Udan TashtariOctober 09, 2010

    Great writing...

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  21. SaumyaNovember 06, 2010

    @Shekhar:thanks!

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  22. SaumyaNovember 06, 2010

    @Maverick: thank you for understanding :)

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